Rona and the Moon

WALT re-tell a story in our own words. a story in our own words.

I used Screencastify to record my story.

Math Strategies

 I have been learning how to solve addition equations using the place value strategy.

First Draft - Mahuika Show

1. We are writing about our experience at the Mahuika Show.

Yesterday we drove to a amazing show Kahu was the oldies sista bat she was cosily complaining  about  sissy always avoding all ov her jobs 28.5.2021 but were is sissy Kahu went to find here wen she fond sissy gumaer aped and said to them sissy you ned to do mare jobs and to Kahu you ned to have more fun Kahu side okay she said but wene gamer had gone she polled a kete but sissy Copland wiy do you get a now kete but as she sboke a mite grawe roste then nan came raning she gabd the kete and was about to put the litae bat she turred to coal and the last flamine fingga of mahuika aperd    

Next steps

• Re-read each sentence - does it look right? does it make sense?
• Full stops and capital letters
• Correct your fast words