Tsunami Evacuation

 We wrote a recount about our evacuation experience.

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Last Friday we went up the hill. At first I felt anxious. When we had got halfway up I was sweating, we stopped to have lunch. After lunch we carried on up the hill when we got to the top over the hill the view was spectacular. I could see the beach and the school looked tinsy tiny. I was worried for my family and my animals. When we got the message that it was safe and we could go back down, I was relieved that my dad was okay. I gave him a hug, we went home but I still felt a bit scared. I thought that the tsunami would get us overnight. In the morning it was still fine. I went back to school on Monday and everyone was fine too. Whew!

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