Asttle Narrative Writing - A New Friend

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

WALT write a creative narrative story!

 once upon a time I was lice staging but then boom! A lowed booming sowed came from behind I looked bake and what I sow booting twos me. Was an avalanche I sow a cave ahead I dive into it but the entry got blot. So I cod not expanse but then a screechy wiser echoed throw the cave but after that I herd a different noise it was a win so. I got up and fold the wining   and after  a little bit of waking I came across a puppy I pick it up it felt cold so I put it in my jacket. For a bit and sat down when it was a bit warmer I gave some food and water that was in my bag. But I dint have a lot so I stood up and care on walking with the little dog but then we came across a frock. In the rode lucky the screechy wiser told use were to go then we came to a. river I knew it lend to sun lite but I did,t knew if it led to. A water fau so we jump it and cared on waking. ahead  I cod see lite in my excitement I ran with the puppy foling closes behind we we woke up in a room of Gold and in the was a dimind I was just about to pick it up then I got a big friyt. Because it sated to tolk but I anod it and climnd the lader and was on the top of the motin .And the frest plas I went was the vet the vegetation said I cod keep him I cold him lucky. And lived hupy ever after.